Dreamer

Close your eyes for awhile my friend, I heard there lies a moon far behind the black sky, I heard lovers were dancing beneath, can you hear them singing? I can feel their tipsy steps making rhymes on floor, and smell of perfumes filling the air, I heard a sun rises to brighten up their world, and birds do sing them charming melodies at morning, they say they have roses in colors and beautiful trees in the streets, and have they told you about the sea yet? They say it smells so wonderful and the delicate air of seas caresses their cheeks with soft wet breezes, oh my friend, what have we seen in the dark but the fragile ghosts that we are!

“Hush” whispered to me, “I lighted up a moon inside my heart and I smell lilies and jasmine in my nose, my dreams play tunes my heart dance on, they speak to me all night and there I see a starry night floats above, I feel the warmth of a sun in my soul as it hugs tight, whispering to me hymns of love and joy, lightening candles for hopes which had accompanied me amongst the dark, why have you closed your eyes my friend? Look through the colorful roses I painted for you with eyes wide open, let the lights off so you would see clearer, let the lights off so you can brighten up the world that hides with you, for my friend, what have we seen in the dark but the free spirits that we have become!

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4 thoughts on “Dreamer

  1. Beautifully written…I actually closed my eyes and…lo…there was the moon behind the black sky!! 🙂 and the line “what have we seen in the dark but the fragile ghosts that we are” especially caught my attention, I loved it!
    But the magic starts to fade in the 2nd para…the usage of the word “nose” looks little annoying here..u’ve used “night” twice in the same line(sorry! Not being mean. Hope u’re open to suggestions..)
    “I lifted up a moon inside my heart and smelled lilies and jasmines, my dreams play tunes my heart dances on, they speak to me all night and there I see a star spangled sky float above”

  2. You have a remarkable descriptive talent and flow, which allowed me to smell the morning and the jasmine in the air. It is a rare attribute, yet a true joy, when a writer can take the reader somewhere; remove them from their space and allow them to float with your words. There is nothing better than to be encapsulated by the story – so much so, that nothing else exists. You provided me that freedom, and my day is better for it. Thank you! Cheers, Dave

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